choppy!

You have to work on your perspective when
doing a film like this. Some of the animation
was too choppy and slow. Some music in the club
or sound of some sort would have kept the viewer
intrest a lil longer. Not bad for a first try.
You should try creating your illustrations in a
program like Illustrator or Freehand.
Detailed story boards always help.

That was not a preview. feedback on what???

The point of a preview is to tease your audience with a attractive piece of the movie or game to come. That was not a preview. How can we give feedback on that. Just some moving models, backrounds and music you did'nt create. A waste of
NGs space.