The Assassin choppy!
You have to work on your perspective when
doing a film like this. Some of the animation
was too choppy and slow. Some music in the club
or sound of some sort would have kept the viewer
intrest a lil longer. Not bad for a first try.
You should try creating your illustrations in a
program like Illustrator or Freehand.
Detailed story boards always help.
// Battle of Endor 